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Thursday, 27 December 2018

summer learning journey going going gone

life in new zealand is really cool we have a a tall tower one of the tallest tower in the world its called the sky tower  and other places like crispy creams.
But most important are vechiles we have lots of electricity and if world war 3 happened were of the safstest place to be beacuse were on the peace list were number 3.
so we are making a 3rd lane on the motor way which will help the traffic out 
the captial city is in the north island.

4 comments:

  1. Hello Andrew,
    MY name is Vitaraag. I really loved your blog post. New Zealand is a really cool place indeed. Maybe next time you could elaborate on your idea so the reader can get a perfect image of what you are talking about.

    Vitaraag

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  2. Kia Ora, Andrew!

    Thanks for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, ' Going, going... gone', and for creating a little story about how New Zealand is (or should I say, was) in 2018. New Zealand sounds like such a wonderful place from the way that you've written about it— when you talk about the tall tower, what are you referring to? Remember that your readers don't know about New Zealand. Do you know where Krispy Kreme's is from? And wow— I had no idea that we were number 4 on the 'Peace List'— can you reply to this post with a link of this? I'd really like to check that fact out. What capital city in the North Island are you referring to (again, remember that your reader doesn't know about New Zealand).

    Don't forget to write the week number, the day number, and the activity number next to the name, like this: SLJ Week 1, D5, A3 'Going, going... gone'
    This will really help me allocate your points accordingly!

    Cheers,

    Jordan

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    1. here is the link
      https://www.lifehack.org/articles/lifestyle/20-most-peaceful-countries-the-world-live.html

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    2. Hey Andrew,

      Wow— thanks for sending me the link, very generous of you :) I'm really happy that they've listed New Zealand as number 3, but this is an article that isn't what we like to call 'peer-reviewed'. I'm very humbled that the author, Robert Locke has given New Zealand such a wonderful rating, but he washes over New Zealand being one of the least 'polluted' countries in the world— most of our waterways ARE polluted. Gives us a lot to think about!

      Cheers,

      Jordan

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