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Monday, 31 December 2018

summer learning journey The great Taupo cycle challege

  1.  The first person I would want on my support team would be my mother she supported me in maths and my dad in school.                                                                                                             
  2. My best friend we have helped each other in class were its hard on one of us that's why I chose him.                                                                                                                                                   
  3.  My old freind that left the school I creid beacusehe left thanks to him I atcully got A groupof six freinds.
  4. so that is my support crew



 
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  1. SLJ in Kootuitui10 January 2019 at 10:40

    Heya Andrew,

    Well done for completing another Summer Learning Journey activity, 'The Great Taupō Cycle Challenge' and for telling us about not 3, but 4 people who you'd like to have on your crew.
    I was happy to see you select your parents and your best friend, who've all supported you in your schooling— that's so great to hear. How do you think your maths is doing now?
    I'm sorry that your old friend left your school, I remember what that was like when I'd had to say goodbye to friends because they moved away. What is this friends name? Do you still keep in touch?

    Your 4th point doesn't need to be made in to a point because it's your conclusion. You could just remove the '4.' and finish with 'So that is my support crew' and maybe say thank you— this shows your readers that you are signing off, like this:

    Thanks,

    Jordan

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