my beast looks like a hard rock monster with sharp teeth
that has acid on the tips so it can cut through steel
which makes it a dangrous creature.
It smells like sulphur and also smell like burned meat.
My monster will mostly feel rocky but some squishy spots too (were his organs are)
It will sound like a drum being hit hard, a loud noise that echos and if it falls down it will shake the room that he's in or the ground.
Hi Andrew
ReplyDeleteI really like how you described you charter and you been Pacific like hard rock monster with sharp teeth I thought that was really creative how you said that hard rock monster instead of a strong monster
Next time you could draw a picture of you charter and decorate and stuff you could also decorate you text and change the font and stuff
This reminded me off my beast well it is not that of a beast it is really weird you should go check my blog here is link http://pcsmehakpreetk.blogspot.com/
Looking forward to your blog posts :)
Mehakpreet
Hey Mehakpreet,
DeleteSo nice to see you still leaving thoughtful comments on Andrew's blog posts. His description of his character was very good and specific, wasn't it? I like how you've suggested that he draw a picture of his character, good job!
You've earned yourself another 2 bonus points for this thoughtful comment :)
Keep up the great work, Mehakpreet!
Cheers,
Jordan
Kia Ora Andrew,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations for completing yet another Summer Learning Journey activity, "Fantastic Beasts". Wow— your description of your beast is fabulous! I like the addition of acid on their tips so that they can cut through steal, nice job. Your beast also sounds like it may smell quite a lot, I think that the smell of "sulphur" was an excellent addition.
I'd love to see a picture of this beast, do you think you could draw one up for us?
I look forward to reading more of your blog posts!
Cheers,
Jordan