Hi Andrew! Von'Zy from May Road School here. I really like your story because it says to be continued. This makes me excited to read more. The names you used made me think of the Andrew and dominique in room 13. I wanted to know who is Chris? Bye!
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Hi Andrew! Von'Zy from May Road School here. I really like your story
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The names you used made me think of the Andrew and dominique in room 13. I wanted to know who is Chris? Bye!
chris is my friend he likes to play handball and basketball
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